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Donna Hyatt

Poet: Colette Baldwin
Poem: Windows
In capuring the importance of the past she has given great power to the future. I love it......
-Saturday, December 10, 2005 at 02:23:27 (GMT)

Paul Whiteside

Poet: Linda Marie Van Tassell
Poem: Stairway to Heaven
An excellent poem - full of great feeling. I've been interested in stairways to heaven since listening to Led Zeppelin's, Stairway to Heaven, and ancient philosophies about the Tree of Life. I thought the poem was so inspirational that I have copied your link to a friend of mine for her to gain inspiration from it too.
-Wednesday, November 09, 2005 at 09:44:10 (GMT)

Adam

Poet: Irfan Master
Poem: O' Naishapur
Nice to see a re-working of Omar Khayam. His work is still relevant today and you do a great job of capturing his essence. Keep it up.
-Tuesday, November 08, 2005 at 15:53:19 (GMT)

Joneve McCormick
Soul to Soul
Poet: Dimitris P. Kraniotis
Poem: Fictitious Line
Strong, delicate, wonderful. Thank you.
-Tuesday, November 01, 2005 at 10:02:11 (GMT)

JoAnna

Poet: Linda Marie Van Tassell
Poem: Majestica
Beautiful poem. I was doing a yahoo search and this page came up. My daughters name is Majestica. The only meaning I can find for her name is Princess. Which for her is fitting since she is 4 and all about the disney characters. If you know of any other meanings please let me know. I used to be very into writing short stories and some poetry in my younger days. More so creative writings. I will def. put this site on my favorites list. Thanks for sharing your heart with all of us. I am not so open with my work. More scared I think. Thanks again. JoAnna
-Thursday, October 27, 2005 at 04:30:21 (BST)

Georgeann McGee

Poet: Michael Hillmer
Poem: Supernovas
The information in your biography was enlightening. So you are both from a steel town and a husband. I can see from reading your poetry that you must be a very honest person who must have suffered greatly the last thirty years. I wonder who this poem is meant to be for: wife, girlfriend, father?
-Monday, October 17, 2005 at 19:59:10 (BST)

Tim Harrison

Poet: Kernerwek Prydythe
Poem: Feather
I enjoyed reading your poem very much. Thank you.
-Sunday, October 16, 2005 at 17:57:12 (BST)

marci

Poet: Collette Baldwin
Poem: Home at Last
beautifully written!

-Monday, October 03, 2005 at 01:30:16 (BST)

Hadia

Poet: Sheema Kalbasi
Poem: For Women of Afghanistan
Hello, well I really enjoyed reading all those poems..
I enjoyed them so much that I wrote them down! :) I went to Pakistan in late January and stayed there for a couple of weeks.
My uncle always goes to Afhganistan and tells me all about it and I really feel what they are going through.
Also my grandpa (Janetkhan) worked for the goverment, but I never got to meet him because he was assesanated while going to masjid.
Good job on your poems.. Hadia
-Sunday, October 02, 2005 at 02:51:20 (BST)

Shabnum G.

Poet: Sheema Kalbasi
Poem: For Women of Afghanistan
Wow!! I really enjoyed reading all of your poems. I went to Peshawar, Pakistan in March and my dad went to
Afghanistan and I saw the video I can really see what you guys are writting about. My grandpa was the president of the bank of Afghanistan-janetkhan. But he got assasinated before my dad was 20. Ok well I wanted to say something. thanks.
-Sunday, October 02, 2005 at 02:46:50 (BST)

Karen

Poet: Fabian Schurgers
Poem: Melancholy
hey there.. i totally enjoy your poem!
it was great!
and with the picture border at the side of the page, it only adds onto the whole "melancholy" of the poem..
may i know where did you get the picture?
-Saturday, September 17, 2005 at 09:37:44 (BST)

Kerry Doyle

All Poets
All their poems
i'm spending hours reading these great poems.
such a great treat, thanks to all.
-Wednesday, September 07, 2005 at 23:41:57 (BST)

Ellen Crawley

Poet: David Coe
Poem: Blakeney Point
Hi David, really like the poem! I am a TV researcher working for Norwich-based company Imago Productions, and we are making a regional arts programme looking at artists, poets and other creative people who are inspired by the beautiful Norfolk/Suffolk coast. It would be great to have a chat to you about your work. - please feel free to give me a call on 01603 727627. Ellen
-Thursday, September 01, 2005 at 16:04:02 (BST)

Elizabeth Griffin

Poet: Mazier Ouiliaei Na
Poem: Hands
An evocative poem Simple, complex thoughtful and warm.
I would like permission to use it in the printed version of a sermon which, within the next week or two will appear in www.gbgm-umc.org/fairfaxvt
Thank you.
-Saturday, August 06, 2005 at 19:43:36 (BST)

Shimanta Bhattacharyya

Poet: Joneve McCormick
Poem: Internet Friends
Your poem says it all Joneve. I am glad to be one of your "Internet Friends". Thank you
-Saturday, August 06, 2005 at 03:44:05 (BST)

Joneve McCormick
Soul to Soul
Poet: Ananya S. Guha
Poem: I Consecrate
A wonderful poem and poems - thank you Mr. Guha.
-Monday, August 01, 2005 at 14:24:13 (BST)

Maureen Lange A175

Poet: John D. Ballam
Poem: Court Square

John, I thought this poem was really beautiful.

-Thursday, July 28, 2005 at 09:58:07 (BST)

shreya

Poet: roger.b.humes
Poem: the flood
very beautiful and deep!really very emotional!
-Monday, July 18, 2005 at 15:23:46 (BST)

Joneve
Soul to Soul
Poet: Shimanta Bhattacharyya
Poem: Kashmir
Bravo! And all of your poems are extraordinary.

-Saturday, July 09, 2005 at 15:58:51 (BST)

Dawn McCuiston

Poet: Anna Copeland
Poem: Hour Glass
My brother killed himself a few months ago and he was only 28 years old. I was looking for a picture of an hour glass because that kinda expresses how I feel I feel he died before his time and I came across your poem and the picture on that page with the sky background and the hour glass could you tell me where you got that picture. I know this isn't the kind of comment you were exspecting even though i did love your poem. Please let me know if you don't mind where I could get that picture it means alot to me. Dawn McCuiston
-Thursday, July 07, 2005 at 03:52:35 (BST)

maolcolum

Poet: Shimanta Bhattacharyya
Poem: all
And here again pure pleasure of reading
-Sunday, July 03, 2005 at 22:40:31 (BST)

maolcolum

Poet: Ananya S. Guha
Poem: all
As alway I so enjoy this poets work
-Sunday, July 03, 2005 at 22:38:25 (BST)

Leona Joyce Anderson
poetry.com/links/linksmain.asp
Poet: Olutayo Kadmiel Osunasan
Poem: The Darkest Night
I can honestly say that I enjoyed reading your poetry. I felt your words to be powerful, with depth of meaning. One could visualize being present in, The Darkest Night and feeling pain, death and despair and praying for strength and renewed hope, say a miracle to appear. Dispare was felt, but hope hung on by faith.
I read all your poems in this offering and I found them to be a wonderful read and food for thought. Thank you.
-Wednesday, June 22, 2005 at 17:10:59 (BST)

Lobat Asadi

Poet: Amil Imani
Poem: Zarathustra
I wonder if any religion has proven itself to be of value in the debate of mixing church and state? Even if more balanced and peace loving, it seems that patriarchal religions focus more on the image of God as man, and impose "God's" laws on man. When we look at it objectively, God can only logicaly exist as an energy. We crave to put God in human form for our own comprehension and often times control of a people and nation(s).
-Thursday, June 16, 2005 at 23:13:32 (BST)

Trude

Poet: Michael Hillmer
Poem: Supernovas
really like your poem "supernovas" - I read it now three times and each time, it seems more beautiful
-Thursday, June 09, 2005 at 19:08:26 (BST)

Shamsul Kamal

General Comment:

This is the best poem website i've ever seen.
-Thursday, May 26, 2005 at 18:10:48 (BST)

Terry

All Poets
All poems
It's been great reading all the works. A wealth of talent.
Thanks,
TC
-Tuesday, May 24, 2005 at 08:55:11 (BST)

Nateka Miller

Poet: Jacqui Thornton
Poem: sunrise
I really like your poems.I would like to read more of your poems.
-Monday, March 28, 2005 at 18:02:35 (BST)

Melissa Whelan

Poet: Tri Tran
Poem: My Art Work
I would like to start by saying wow, almost every line hit me in the same perspective it hits you. I love how you compare colors with moods and feelings. I focus on what I see behind the words, what I think was going on when you wrote it. I write myself nothing published, just notebooks of my own. I love reading other people's work, and I love feedback on my own so I can imagine you like it to. I throw the word love around alot as you notice, but that's simply because I truly love to write, in a way it's my biggest passion. I feel I write in varity yet I have still to wait upon my my glory. Which in itself will be when I find my true way of writing. I enjoy writing short stories, but mostly poems. In the end my writing is seen as a dark side of me that doesn't escape until I find a pen and paper. I also notice when I am alone and I write I feel like I couldn't need anyone else. In some way I think every writer should feel like that and I'm sure most do. That over fullfilling feel of emense pleasure when you write something amazing (even if you're the only one to think it) I wanted to comment specifically on the line ..
" I smear crimson upon my peaceful nights
As I blaze un fury;
My heart, unforgiving" ...That is breath taking.
Have you ever read something and thought it couldn't be anymore perfect in those words. Well that's what this line makes me think. It's beautiful. Anyways I won't take anymore of your time. Write back if you'd like. -Melissa
-Friday, February 18, 2005 at 19:07:30 (GMT)

Simon Shaw

Poet: Mary Guckian
Poem: Graffiti
Dear Mary,
I am Head of Art at Cowplain Community School in Hampshire. I am currently teaching a scheme of work with my Year 9 pupils who are combining the style of graffiti art with ideas associated with pro / anti war imagery. I would like to encorporate poetry with their work for a school display. I would be grateful if you would allow us to use your poem. As part of the teaching and pisplay.
Yours sincerely
Simon Shaw (simon.shaw@cowplain.hants.sch.uk)
-Thursday, February 17, 2005 at 23:45:35 (GMT)

ms. moxie

Poet: Sheelma Kalbasi
Poem: For Women of Afghanistan
Hi-
I am a Women's Studies student in Vancouver Canada, and I wanted to let Sheelma Kalbasi know I will be sharing her poetry in my university class on a project/presentation I am doing on Afghanistan and International Human Rights.
Great piece of poetry! Thanks for posting it.

Best of luck with your future writing,
Ms. Moxie
S.F.U. Student
Vancouver, Canada
-Thursday, February 17, 2005 at 02:16:05 (GMT)

Jean Rice

Poet: Mary Guckian
Poem: Family Photograph
Hi Mary - One of my favorites! I have your two soft-bound poetry books, "Perfume of the Soil" and "The Road To Gowel" (Swan Press/Dublin) and must say I enjoy them very much. Especially nice is that you have included many charming photographs you have taken of Leitrim, Dublin, etc., and little snippets about growing up. My sister tells me this week that she and I just might take our first trip to Ireland in the next 1-2 years! Jean
-Friday, February 11, 2005 at 17:18:35 (GMT)

anne wyatt

Poet: Leszek Kobiernicki
Poem: Hassid
Truly beautiful. A wonderful insight into the warmth, beauty and compassion many have lost. You have the gift my friend.
-Thursday, February 03, 2005 at 09:51:05 (GMT)

Sue Oakey

Poet: Olutayo Kadmiel Osunsan
Poem:Twilight
This poem seems to sum up the peaceful feeling of the twilight time.
I wonder if I may quote it as inspiration for a garden design for part of my studies in Landscape and Garden design?
Thanks.
-Saturday, January 29, 2005 at 17:37:38 (GMT)

Leszek Kobiernicki

Poet: Nicole Petrillo
Poem: A Wonderful Place
It's early to tell, but I believe you have the divine gift. Truly wonderful ! I like this more than I can say
-Saturday, January 29, 2005 at 10:09:39 (GMT)

Leszek Kobiernicki

Poet: Terry A O'Neal
Poem: My Backyard
This poem really sings. You have the gift of spiritual sweetness. Isn't it wonderful ?
-Saturday, January 29, 2005 at 09:42:28 (GMT)

usbay

Poet: anna. copeland
Poem: Goodnight Little One
well i promise to sing this one to mu year n half old son daily, cause i feel its sooooooooooooooooooo beautiful
-Friday, December 03, 2004 at 18:40:49 (GMT)

amber

Poet: sheema kalbasi
Poem: never to be called mom
what a moving...strong poem...it hit me...thanks
-Saturday, November 20, 2004 at 19:41:29 (GMT)

Jane Nittaka

Poet: Olutayo Osunsan
Poem: All his poems
I enjoyed your poems and I will get a copy of your book. I think you are a remarkable poet. You are inspirational. All your poems speak to me!
-Thursday, November 18, 2004 at 12:56:45 (GMT)

siera
Poet: sheema kalbasi
Poem: For Women of Afghanistan
that was facinating. i loved it!!!!
-Wednesday, November 10, 2004 at 22:00:30 (GMT)

Stephen Jordan
SHADE AND SHADOW
Poem: MAJESTICA
Is MAJESTICA's title any relation to the film? Just curious. (Details at site)
-Wednesday, November 10, 2004 at 19:17:58 (GMT)

Poet: Melissa Rae Burns
Poem: ''What You Don't See''
This is an outstanding poem.It is simple yet it speaks out of felt experience.There is 'suffering' but more than a glimmer of hope.I am sure one will hear more of Melissa in the days to come,she is only sixteen.I wish her all the very best in her tryst with poetry,and by implication life.
-Sunday, October 31, 2004 at 15:38:29 (GMT)

laolu

Poet: Melissa Rae Burns
Poem: You think you know me
i belive its an outstanding work of art with simplicity,she's young and she's good
-Sunday, October 31, 2004 at 14:36:56 (GMT)

nurellisya

Poet: Anna Copeland
Poem: Goodnight little one
nice and good poem you made.
I like the way you start your poem.
I really like it a lot.
thank you.
-Sunday, October 24, 2004 at 07:26:50 (BST)

Boipelo Busk

Poet: Olutayo Kadmiel Osunsan
Poem: The Darkest Night
Keep the good work. Your poem is touching the soul. As African and a witness to the aids devastating effects on the African continent, it's gives one hope to read a poem like yours.
-Wednesday, October 13, 2004 at 10:39:55 (BST)

Charlene

Poet: Michael Hillmer
Poem: Letting Go
What a beautiful, simple way of saying it all.
Thanks!
A quick question... does Mr. Hillmer originate from Canada?
-Wednesday, September 22, 2004 at 07:16:38 (BST)

sarah

Poet: Jacqui Thornton
Poem: Call of the Wolves
I loved your poem!! cause i love wolves to begin with and i was wondering if it would be ok if i had your permission to print this poem so i can recite this poem in a thing at school. You will have full credit for the poem since it is yours. please let me know as soon as possible. thanks!!!

-Friday, September 10, 2004 at 02:29:49 (BST)

Glory Groom

Poet: Ananya S.Guha
Poem: God
Dear Mr. Guha,
I really liked your poem. Short and simple yet profound. Are you in the midst of some sort of spiritual re-awakening?
-Thursday, September 02, 2004 at 05:59:03 (BST)

phil

all of them
all of them
keep up the good works!
-Friday, August 27, 2004 at 13:00:27 (BST)

Debbie Pacella

Poet: Melissa Burns
Poem: What you don't see
Beautiful, deep and with SOUL. Keep up the good work, keep the pen flowing.
-Friday, August 27, 2004 at 01:57:34 (BST)

Jill

All
All
Great Poems
-Thursday, August 26, 2004 at 22:21:21 (BST)

Justine Ibrahim

Poet: Adekanmbi Adeshile Olaolu
Poem: Africa My Afrikaa
this poem really touched me. I read it to my teacher and to my class in school and some of them started to cry. It is moving and the message is great.
-Tuesday, August 03, 2004 at 11:29:23 (BST)

Rosemary

Poet: Maziar Ouliaei-Nia
Poem: Hands
This is a beautiful poem containing both a question and an answer, or at least a place to look for the answer(within), and like all good poems, spinning the mind in at least four directions. Thank you!
-Monday, August 02, 2004 at 00:46:58 (BST)

JJ Walsh

All
All
Keep up the good work
-Wednesday, July 28, 2004 at 11:34:11 (BST)

SWIFTY

Poet: Sheema Kalbasi
Poem: Mama In The War
it was beautiful, nothing more needs to be said

swifty " respect "
-Tuesday, July 27, 2004 at 16:15:12 (BST)

bev

Poet: Sheema kalbasi
Poem: i am a woman
What a beautiful poem. So meaningful.
-Saturday, July 03, 2004 at 08:21:30 (BST)

laolu

Poet: jan oskar hansen
Poem: women
i think its an oustanding work of art well done for a good job.laolu
-Thursday, July 01, 2004 at 14:11:57 (BST)

Dr. Wold

Poet: Anthony Bavin
Poem: Love defined
It's the first poem that I have read that touches the meaning of love as it is told to use through the bible. well described, humanely defined
-Wednesday, June 02, 2004 at 13:48:39 (BST)

Sue Machlin
somewords
Poet: Peter Franklin
Poem: Go to the River
Hey Peter, found you on this site, loved this poem...as I do all your poems, rhymic and visual and sensitive. put some more on, this is a pretty site...
-Wednesday, May 26, 2004 at 04:36:27 (BST)

Natalia

Poet: Shane Larkin
Poem: Knowing...
Short but powerful. I liked it! Any chance of reading more of your work? N.
-Wednesday, May 19, 2004 at 14:31:37 (BST)

Crusty

Poet: Melissa Noseworthy
Poem: All of Them!
Hey Princess:

You're popping up all over the web! I do like the things you write!

The Tired, Cripple Old Man!
-Tuesday, May 18, 2004 at 22:41:29 (BST)

meg

Poet: Olutayo Kadmiel Osunsan
Poem: Dreams
It's one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read! I'm under great impress! :)
-Tuesday, April 20, 2004 at 12:43:55 (BST)

Stan Nochasak

Poet: Melissa Rae Burns
Poem:"What You Don't See"
Melissa Rae's "What You Don't See" is simply beautiful. My name is Stan Nochasak and am a member of the Baha'i Faith community and currently living in St. John's, Newfoundland and Labrador. I am Inuit ancestry and 29 years old. I love her poem. Thanks for sharing.

Sincere regards,
Stan Nochasak
-Saturday, March 20, 2004 at 17:06:19 (GMT)

Bill

Musing On Life
Observations
I try to visit as many web sites as I can and I enjoyed very much reading your poetry. I think you can learn a lot through the eyes of a poet. That is why I like going into cyberspace and visiting with other people. It gives you a better understanding of what they know, think, and feel. Thanks and best regards, Bill.
��"Musing On Life" by Bill McKeen
http://community.webtv.net/lbsnmk/doc

-Wednesday, March 17, 2004 at 13:55:29 (GMT)

Shimanta Bhattacharyya

Poet: William E.Ames
Poem: Hemmingway
Hi,Simply superb!
-Friday, March 12, 2004 at 05:10:53 (GMT)

Shimanta Bhattacharya

Poet: Tina Matteson
Poem: Empty
Dear Tina,
I really liked your poem. It succintly sums up the the stark reality of human existence. But all is not lost, I for one, still do believe in "the holiness of the heart's affections.'
-Thursday, March 11, 2004 at 12:54:53 (GMT)

LIZ

Poet: Olutayo Kadmiel Osunsan
Poem: as shy as the night
very good poem I like short poems they give you something to think about thankyou poets
-Sunday, March 07, 2004 at 20:07:22 (GMT)

Nicola Garnett
Poet: Linda Marie Van Tassell
Poem: Stairway to Heaven
How beautiful ...
-Sunday, February 15, 2004 at 14:58:54 (GMT)

Kamal Kamakhi Biswasroy

Poet: Sheema Kalbasi
Poem: God Speaks Hebrew
It was beautiful. I am impressed as well as inspired.
I would be very much grateful if you can send me some more poems on God or any site for the same.
waiting for your reply.thank you
-Saturday, January 17, 2004 at 19:33:37 (GMT)

Jan and John Rutley

Poet: Martin Rutley
Poem: not read yet
Hello,
I was surfing the Rutley name and found your poems. at this time I have not read them, but will do. I am the Daughter in-law of the late Cecil Bernard Rutley, Author. Perhaps you would like to look him up. His late sister was cecily M. Rutley also wrote several children's books and nature books ... from Jan (My husbands name is John. B. Rutley.)
-Friday, January 16, 2004 at 09:10:45 (GMT)

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